wow, stacie, this story has it all: love, suspence, emotion…excellent job with the creative writing.
i totally remember that simple minds song – love the reference!
Oh Stacie, I loved this one!! I love the concept of a haunted song… following her everywhere. How awesome.
You set the mood and tone of the story right away and it was paced so well! Awesome job, as always. 🙂
I really like the way you interspersed the lyrics — very nicely done! And I’m so glad you’ve come along with me this month! Arr we the only ones to hit both grids all month? Awesome!
Haunting!
I could feel her despair in your writing, very well done!
It really felt like there was a build-up all the way to the grande finale 😉
wow, stacie, this story has it all: love, suspence, emotion…excellent job with the creative writing.
i totally remember that simple minds song – love the reference!
I really like this one, Stacie…really spooky. I need to get into those challenges. They look like so much fun!
You are an amazeball writer Stacie!!! Love it! 😀
Wow, Stacie! This is really great. Unexpected, haunting, emotional. I love everything about it.
Oh Stacie, I loved this one!! I love the concept of a haunted song… following her everywhere. How awesome.
You set the mood and tone of the story right away and it was paced so well! Awesome job, as always. 🙂
Yay, you! What a great read! I enjoyed the pacing and the song references. I’m telling myself you had fun writing this!
Now I am singing that song, hehe 😉
I really like the way you interspersed the lyrics — very nicely done! And I’m so glad you’ve come along with me this month! Arr we the only ones to hit both grids all month? Awesome!
Creepy and sad…and I suppose for anyone who was around in the 80s and aware of that songs..it does bring back haunting memories.
Love how that song kept playing. Eerie. Chilling.
Big points for creating enduring image and planting a song in my head for the day.