6 Responses to “Awakening”

  1. Cyn K • March 11, 2015 at 8:51 pm #

    “held hostage” probably describes how you felt, too.

  2. Meg • March 11, 2015 at 10:38 pm #

    Yes, spring! And I think my crocuses (I want to say “croci,” though incorrect) are held hostage still too. This is a great cinquain, Stacie.

  3. Nate • March 11, 2015 at 10:57 pm #

    Subbing for Stacie in this poem are patient crocuses.

  4. Jennifer Knoblock • March 12, 2015 at 8:51 am #

    Spring is for cinquains. I know this now. 🙂 I noticed–suddenly–those liberated crocuses here last weekend. Hallelujah.

  5. Samantha Brinn Merel • March 12, 2015 at 11:11 am #

    Hurray for melting snow and sunny skies!

  6. Silverleaf • March 12, 2015 at 3:47 pm #

    I think we all see the crocuses as personifications of you after this long, snowy winter 🙂 This is a lovely cinquain, Stacie!

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